Fairly Silly
Whoa, you're Neil's little sister? You guys are hilarious, it must run in the family. Your animation and artwork is also very smooth. You've got a lot of potential here.
Fairly Silly
Whoa, you're Neil's little sister? You guys are hilarious, it must run in the family. Your animation and artwork is also very smooth. You've got a lot of potential here.
You Fools
Listen up, I did not rip anything from the Arfenhouse three trailer. My entry is a PARODY of a little something called the KILL BILL TEASER TRAILER. It can be viewed here, http://www.apple.com/trailers/miramax/kill_bill/medium.html
We both parodied that trailer, but that is where the
similarities end. Ripping off his work would be something more like what Joe Outterside did, which was use symbols from other people's movies! Do you see anything about arfenhouse in my trailer? NO!
You damned fools better stop starting shit, because you guys have no idea what you're talking about.
Good Start
It doesn't fit in with the rest of the junk on here then it will probably stand out. Don't be discouraged by the plethra of prepubescence you may find here. Just keep trying, this animation was a bit short and could have used a little more variety in it, such as maybe different or dynamic camera angles. I can relate thouh to your problems with teachers telling me to stop doodling in class...haha, look who's laughing now!
Hardly Professional
This animation is good for somebody just beginning, but I'd hardly call this pro on any level. It was kinding tedious to watch, you should really work on improving by using some masks, frame by frame, and different angles.
This was simply amazing
This is the best piece of animation I've seen on newgrounds in a long long time. This is the work of a professional. Everything about it was so refined and beautiful. The backgrounds were lush and dynamic with great perspective. The animation was so fluid and lifelike. There was great mix of tweens and frame by frame. The ambient sound effects gave it such a realistic feel, no the mention the cinematography was fantastic. The opening credit shots really set the mood. Let's not forget the story though, it was clever and highly enjoyable. This was just simply amazing, I forgot I was watching a flash movie.
Good idea, room for improvement
I think you've got some potential with definate room to improve. I liked the sock puppet at the beginning, his voice was very well done and it was very clean and crisp. The second part was a bit inaudible and difficult to understand. Were they preforming Othello? So, just keep it up.
there is always room for improvement unless you've filled that space with jell-o... and yes, that was a portion of act IV from othello... good ear...
Neat, but needs to be finished
The animation is smooth but you really need that to go longer. At least till the end of the song. By the way, is that the pillows?
omgzomgz I will do the whole song omgomg yes its the pillows yes omgomg and I will try 2 do better on it and omg yes.
the start of a good thing
You got something really good here, it just needs to be refined. The writing and voice acting were excellent. There needs to be more movement in the characters. Also, the perspective on some backgrounds can be better. But otherwise the character designs were pretty good.
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Brooklyn, NY
Joined on 7/8/03